Lots of meanings run through your words.
But excluding the beginning and the end, I couldn't grasp the middle part. Well its not the poet's fault, but the reader's.
Nice theme and a stunning picture.
To be true, I often find it difficult to unlock many poems. Well I have to work on that:)
Posted 7 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
This one's a bit heavy. The Blackberry is any marginalized community or entity, as well as a force o.. read moreThis one's a bit heavy. The Blackberry is any marginalized community or entity, as well as a force or form to shield; a double entendre. Nevertheless, many thanks for dropping by.
7 Years Ago
Thank you Ty for the explanation.
And also a big thanks for taking my words in the right way... read moreThank you Ty for the explanation.
And also a big thanks for taking my words in the right way.
Love your optimism:)
I wouldn't expect everyone to understand the connection of what you are using the BlackBerry analogy for, and every amazing word placed properly where it needs to be. So eloquent, so deep, and such a pleasant read. Thank you, and Namaste
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Sometimes these things are over reader's heads. Can't change that. But it resonates with some, like .. read moreSometimes these things are over reader's heads. Can't change that. But it resonates with some, like yourself. Many thanks.
Seems a metaphor or two here. Mainly perhaps that the Fruit of the Tree dies back a while - as Life does, sometimes good or bad, calm or stressful.. bright and happy or dark and dreary. Time brings changes, hope.. then, sadly the opposite. Tis how it is.
The Blackberry is any marginalized community or entity. As well as a force or form to shield. Double.. read moreThe Blackberry is any marginalized community or entity. As well as a force or form to shield. Double entendre. Many thanks for dropping in.
7 Years Ago
Apologies, didn''t understand the word, therefore my words are irrelevant. However, learned somethin.. read moreApologies, didn''t understand the word, therefore my words are irrelevant. However, learned something new, never a bad thing.
7 Years Ago
Please, no need to apologies. The beauty of this community, everyone learns. Always.
Lots of meanings run through your words.
But excluding the beginning and the end, I couldn't grasp the middle part. Well its not the poet's fault, but the reader's.
Nice theme and a stunning picture.
To be true, I often find it difficult to unlock many poems. Well I have to work on that:)
Posted 7 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
This one's a bit heavy. The Blackberry is any marginalized community or entity, as well as a force o.. read moreThis one's a bit heavy. The Blackberry is any marginalized community or entity, as well as a force or form to shield; a double entendre. Nevertheless, many thanks for dropping by.
7 Years Ago
Thank you Ty for the explanation.
And also a big thanks for taking my words in the right way... read moreThank you Ty for the explanation.
And also a big thanks for taking my words in the right way.
Love your optimism:)