The Bird's Song Sing

The bird's song sing

Projects cadence in moments and change

A wing span with range,

Stretched a cloack for you and I,

Amongst times of hardship and rain

The bird's song sing

I found grace in belief as I evoked in faith and leaped

As young Condors first flights

Black Shadows, Coral, and Cadet grey nocturnal Owl in night

It'd reach a high and low,

The mother who raised four siblings

Through four seasons on her own

Over and over the wood burns

Age of Red Oak

Determined in tree rings

I'd travel back in time to uncover my true lineage and ancestry

What's left of me

And anything discovered

Will transcend in infinity

Saying every morning,

Regardless of joy or pain

You'll find remedy for each moment and challange

As the Eagle rises

A soar atop Saturn's moons and rings,

Eloquent balance,

The bird's song sing.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"As the eagle rises"- a journey into the origins of oneself with a haunting backdrop of bird song. Mesmerizing theme, eloquent rise and fall of words like birds in flight. Perfect picture and vivid imagery. Inspiring, hopeful and creating a bridge from the past to the future...Awesome poem Ty!

[Ty]

The review that could double as a poem. Glad you dropped by! Thanks!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You make me blush! Thank you Ty!:)

[Nariko]

I like how you incorporated other birds into the poem. I also can see this poem's theme in having hope.

[Dwayne J. Keeves]

Fly great bird fly.... I love watching them mount wings.

[Duncan Brown]

Style Style Style Style.................................

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This reads like a mantra for going on and coping up with life... I like this very much. Well penned, Ty. (:

[Ty]

Life and it's hiccups. Absolutely right. Definitely thank you for stopping by!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome. A pleasure reading (:

[Emily L]

I just love birds. It is true how as humans we can relate to the birds. Very lovely poem, I love to read writes just like these!

[Ty]

I've done my job, then! We all interconnect. Definitely thank you for dropping by.

[Jiya]

Simply amazing!
You don't hesitate to take the reader high in the sky while simultaneously pulling his heartstrings.
Thanks for sharing!

[Ty]

Absolutely too kind. Definitely an attempt at least in outlining a different way of thinking!