Love it. All those possible jigsaw pieces that make us us, and hopefully the makes reader relate and understand fragments of ourselves.
I really like the idea of the dream, against what I at least usually fall into, writing about writing. You only mention writing once, in the second line, which expands the idea to thought, which is of course what we begin with, but you add to this by showing the person behind the pen/keyboard.
You seemed to have hit clarity mode dead centre when you wrote this. Kudos.
Well written, the expression is rhythmic, I like the flow of it all. As a new writter, it clearly describes so well why I write . So thank you for helping me figure myself out : )
What a dream it is! So well-expressed in all its myriad , intricate layers. Multi-media, multi-consciousness imagery ""In hopes it'd digest and seep within.." that's what we live for! Great Ty!
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7 Years Ago
I feel your reviews are poems at times. Much appreciated!
Love it. All those possible jigsaw pieces that make us us, and hopefully the makes reader relate and understand fragments of ourselves.
I really like the idea of the dream, against what I at least usually fall into, writing about writing. You only mention writing once, in the second line, which expands the idea to thought, which is of course what we begin with, but you add to this by showing the person behind the pen/keyboard.
You seemed to have hit clarity mode dead centre when you wrote this. Kudos.