Melted Candle

Melted Candle.

Dim light,

Tantalizing,

Caressing the small of her back

Fantasizing

Drizzling down from her lap

Relaxed candle scent wax

Each finger tip,

Touches down as airliners in sequence

Sensual

Breathing

Slowly trickling, seeping

Startling static attacks,

A spark ignited mood

Fizzling, an ooze,

Evoked in emotions slow motioning

Dopamine,

Oblivious of rain draped window panes.

Reviews

[Nariko]

I like how you used a woman to describe a melted candle