A Lost Friendship

I miss what we used to have

I miss the long talks

I miss the feeling of trust

I miss the long walks

I miss the comfortable feeling

I miss the unending dream of friendship

What happened?

What happened?

Reviews

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

This poem touched me - I'm getting ready to leave for college and only just started to make strong friendships. Still, it's part of life. Good poetry takes familiar concepts and views them in new ways - here you took a familiar concept but you didn't view it any differently. Simple yes - but a reader cannot feel the emotion you are feeling. Great poems can bring an outsider inside. Bes of luck, and keep writing.