Her old Diary

                                               Her old diary found      

                                              to fragile for fingers to touch

                                                    secrets still safe.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Her old diary found
to(too) fragile for fingers to touch
secrets still safe."

Very sad and powerful. I like the contrast between the diaries and secrets.

[Terry L & Linda L Shuff]

I always get those two mixed up. thank you for your comments

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[barleygirl]

I notice you posted mostly short format poems so far. I’m wondering if you do any longer poems? I’d love to see something more developed from you, becuz of the way you pick your topics in such an original & thought-provoking way. These short formats are meant to be thought-provoking, to summon more than the minimal words say, which your poem does quite nicely (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Terry L & Linda L Shuff]

Hi barley girl,Yes I have one to post tomorrow. Most of my poems are 8-12 lines,and cover a variety of topics. Tomorrows could be considered a commentary about a social issue.

[LanelWilson]

Lovely. But shouldn't "to" be "too."