Hooks

You are handsome when the bowl falls clean
It busts into a thousand pieces
Did you mean it when you said, "I'm done?"
You were twice the man that day

I have wanted to be yours
Between a string of your blue moon binges
Many nights coming second to the meth
I wish I could be there with you

Reviews

[Rana]

People hook to different things don't they, if it could be mutual it would be simpler. I like the tone and style, how the thoughts are revealed, with a natural and a thinking back to the time feel. It's good.

[T.S. Claus]

I appreciate your input and compliments and most of all taking the time to read and comment. It means so much to me!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of the language. You words danced in perfect sequence leading to need and want of another. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[T.S. Claus]

I am so thankful you stopped to read and respond. I love hearing what you have to say. Your words mean a lot to me

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Ouch. Painful sentiments.

[T.S. Claus]

Thank you for noticing, reading, and taking the time to comment. It means a lot.

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
I like the meaning!

[Sami Khalil]

The scourge of many people. Drugs are dangerous and must be avoided at any cost. An excellent write to raise awareness...:).............

[T.S. Claus]

Raising awareness of the dangers imposed upon ones heart when you love someone who is using drugs. They will never love you more than their substance.

[Sami Khalil]

All true. You are welcome.

[wordman]

sad,for a while they are a thrill,but sooner or later someone must pay the bill..

[T.S. Claus]

It is a fucked up love story..between the addict and the drug