Wishful Thinking

This is the second part of my three poem collection. Again, it's very early writing and is not very good. Please be gentle with your critiques.

Underneath her mask of sorrow she is seething with rage. She goes on in a trance, but when she sees him, she cannot help it, she loses control and wishes only to inflict the pain on him that he has on her. But really, she wishes that none of this had ever happened. She wishes all of this could go back to normal. But she knows that this is all simply wishful thinking.

Author's Note

This is probably my least favorite of the collection.. I would edit it, but I want to post it as it was originally written.

Reviews

[Brittany DeFranco]

omg, I love it, it gives me so much memories of what I've done and what I wish I could've done. its so sad if you think about it.
Keep writing!!!

[Different Wings]

I agree, this one doesn't quite live up to the first, but it does go well with it. it shows good emotion and hopelessness.