Love Fall

This is actually a song I wrote--the only song I've written. The rhythm will seem scattered written as a poem, but with the music it's very powerful. I have emotional trouble performing it.

There's something about you

That makes me want to run and hide

But at the same time

I want to be right at your side

Something is wrong here

You're not the girl I have dreamed of

I never thought you'd

Be the one to win all my love

My love, my love, my love, my love...

I hardly know you

Though I have known you for years now

Wish I could know you

Wish I could turn you inside out

Learn all your secrets

Find out what makes you tick

Then be the one who

You'd be most likely to pick.

The problem with you is

That you think you're independent

But at the same time

You need a constant companion

I think I could be

The boy you never thought more of

Who becomes the one with whom

You fall in love!

What if you tried me?

What if I'm right after all?

Maybe we're meant to

Change ourselves so we can

Love fall.

Love fall, love fall, love fall, love fall...

Author's Note

Wish you could hear the song. Hopefully the words convey enough of the emotion I packed in it.

Reviews

[OR]

Nice piece
Love is always a great inspiration
Good job
Peace!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Aw, this is beautiful! I'm sure it would be a lovely song, and it makes a great poem. I can't sing in public...terrible stage fright. I can speak and read in public...and act...but singing...no. Like a deer in headlights unless there are about 20 people in front of me.

[....]

i like this it is straight forward. Nice job expressing your emotions

[Worms]

my god you nailed the feeling perfectly
I have had the same issue for two years now
in love with someone that you have known for years, but can't remember
they know you perfectly, but you are their friend and they can't think of you any other way
thank you man from all of us hopless romantics ou here you made it work perfectly