Flat World

Flat World

A Poem by Truman S. Booth
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This is a very abstract poem. If it was on a math test, the correct answer would be "Does not include enough information to solve." For most readers, it's just for fun.

"

*Part One*

 

Imagine the world, so round and so large,

With oceans that harbor the whale and the barge,

That licks upon land, miles wide, I am told,

With mountains and valleys and gardens that hold

All the beauty we talk about, think about, see

In the words of the poets and HD TV.

 

Imagine, now, that the whole world is flat,

(But only so it can be turned upside down

Which will happen later; no question on that)

But nothing has changed: still there’s ocean and ground

And the birds overhead and the demons below

And the trees, and the forests, and gardens, and snow,

And the sand and the sound and all that jazz, you know?

 

Now turn it upside down (as I mentioned before).

 

All the water would fall and ascend into space

Bringing with it its whales, a sad look on their face

As they fall with their friends, like the barges and birds

Into that outer-space.  And imagine the words

Which escape from the vulgarous mouths of the people

Who watch from the branches and tips of the steeple

As all of the birds and the flowers and water

Go falling away with their suns and their daughter.

 

And all of the people in all of the caves

Would die when the flat-world got turned upside down

Because of stalactites, which become stalagmites,

And everyone falls onto one, is impaled,

And bleeds to death promptly while screaming in pain

And listening as all his friends do the same.

 

 

I’m in my house when the world flips around.

Floor becomes ceiling, and that becomes ground.

Cellar is attic, and garret’s below,

Everything breaks from the fall, so I know

I’m the only one safe in the world because I

Chose not to spend time with my family, outside,

In playing a game of socfootbasekickbasket-

Softgolfbouncytennishandrugbyballraquet.

And out of the window, still centered on wall,

I watch all my family as they, shrieking, fall.

A wave and a kiss and they tell me goodbye.

I pretend not to see them, but don’t ask me why.

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Part Two*

 

I’m alone, all alone

Sitting on what used to be

The ceiling, but now

I’m sitting on it, and

The ground is now the ceiling, but it used to be

The ground.

 

The computer’s right beside me, smashed from the fall

From what used to be

The ground but is now the ceiling to what used to be the ceiling but is now

The ground.

And all around me is debris

From similar descents

As that which the poor computer endured

(Or rather did not endure).

 

And of course, with nothing to do

But look at my poor, dead computer

And the upside-down horizon outside the window

(And it is somewhat entertaining to watch the trees"

The weak trees, whose roots aren’t strong enough"

Rip from the earth above and fall into the sky below)

And with nothing else to do,

I think of her.

 

Text her, I think, and see if she’s all right…

If she survived the flip-dee-doo of the world.

But of course, I realize, that would do nothing

Since the satellites are now below me

And my phone would send its signals upwards,

Expecting to reach the satellites,

But they would only absorb into the ground.

 

So I throw my phone out the window, instead, and watch it fall into the sky.

© 2010 Truman S. Booth


Author's Note

Truman S. Booth
This poem is a lot of fun to read aloud. Try it. ;)

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OT
ooo bravo! and even before reading your author's note - you did the rare thing and made me want to read it out loud ha - it's so refreshing to see GOOD rhymes and GOOD cadence/meter/flow bla on here - the whimsical rhyme was brilliantly played - and fun to read - the images and thoughts conveyed were just wonderful too - the concept is great - the world upside down - and I like that you alternated the rhythm in places and that it didn't dictate the poem - most notably when you left it in part 2, the aftermath - perhaps a representation of the upside down world - from rhyme to not - twisted and backwards like those weak trees (great line that was) - though perhaps I look too far into it - but nice to find things to ramble too! the only bit that jarred for me was "Because of stalactites, which become stalagmites,
And everyone falls onto one, is impaled,
And bleeds to death promptly while screaming in pain
And listening as all his friends do the same." - but I think if you played around with it, it would be perfect - truly brilliant piece Truman, enjoyable read! nice job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I don't know whether or not this was meant to be funny but I was cracking up the entire time! I was trying to single out a line to put into this review as my favorite but they were all good. I got nervous for a sec at the end, i though you were going to take us into sappy love story territory, but That just made it all the funnier!
So what will our narrator do as the only survivor in an upside down world where we can't even leave his house full of debris w/o dying himself. Or maybe he does figure out a way to leave? hahahha
I'm anxiously awaiting the sequel. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was funny,,,very right about the math metaphor. I enjoyed it, it was kind of weird the last two stanzas of Part 1 was so twisted and kind of eerie but all in all enjoyable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh my gosh, I love it. The second part is a bit weird with its rhythm, but as a whole, this is a simply fantastic poem. :)

Love the humor and the language... simply brilliant. British brilliant AND American brilliant. :) I especially loved the last two stanzas of the first section... really excellent piece.
Most metered/rhyming poems kind of irk me, and I never have the patience for them. But when I saw that there was a second part a little bit of me went "YES! There's more!" which was an awesome feeling. Great job. :)

100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


The very last line makes me wonder if she found the phone, since it fell to her. This is such a fantastic read.. I had to read it a couple times to fully grasp every image, but that was no trouble at all. Every word and clip in my head became more vibrant and lively. This is a very original piece, to me, since I've never read or heard of anyone who has read something like this. Unique in the most brilliant way. It would be interesting to hear what exactly made you think of the world being flattened and turned upside down, along with the inner story behind it. You pretty much created your own world with this. Amazing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A Delightful Poem.
Made me chuckle as i imagined what was going through your thoughts as you wrote this!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow! This poem was fantastic. The imagery was spot-on and a pleasure to muddle over. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is a twistery tongue in cheek piece of melting clocks and apple headed business suits *beams* i loved it.. so many gorgeous images and unique thoughts.. now when i text someone i will forever imagine my letters floating up into the sky hoping to reach a satellite..

you should record this *smiles* i'd much rather have this backwards alice rabbit hole read TO me..

Posted 14 Years Ago


YAY let's try it sounds like fun
but in any case
amazing literature and very nice topic


Posted 14 Years Ago


I must say, this is a very twisted look at things... but an artist does that. Nice imagery... disturbing reality. Lets hope that physics doesn't change like that.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 13, 2010
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Truman S. Booth
Truman S. Booth

the Bubble, UT



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I am a young writer, but I believe that talent knows no age--although they tend to increase together. There are a few things I love, and a few things I hate. I love language, piano, animated movie.. more..

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