Death

horor

  Where am I?

Crush velvet,

Soft velvet,

but I see nothing

Black.

black is all I see,

My life,

I remember now,

my family,

my friends

My life.

Wait I see light

but I cannot reach it

I struggle

but it feels like trying to breath in water

Then.....

its black again.

 

 

 

Author's Note

beware!!!!!!

Reviews

[jayfray]

this poem is very well its very dark. I felt like I couldn't breath while I was writing it you definitely captured part of the emptiness that is death. Well done