One Last Chance

Something I wrote really late after crying next to the one I love.

 

You put your hand to my face

But all I feel is the breeze

You hardly make me smile

Or feel weak in the knees now

I want to give you it all

Just to hear you love me

Just to hear you say that-

 

I’m not the perfect one

But I want to love you

Look me in the eyes

And you’ll know that it’s true

Baby give me one last chance

One last chance at romance

Let me show you that I do want you

 

I won’t buy you flowers

Let’s take a walk hand in hand

Gaze at all those brilliant stars

Dig our toes in the sand

Show you that I need you

You’re the only one for me

And I want you to see it

 

I’m not the perfect one

But I want to love you

Look me in the eyes

And you’ll know that it’s true

Baby give me one last chance

One last chance at romance

Let me show you that I do want you

 

I’ll take you up in the clouds

Give my hand, give my promise

One day you’ll see that it’s true

That I only want you,

That I only want you.

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I like it, it really come from your deep heart, its very Hard to deal with our heart, once you touch it, once you reach the cure .... it hurt... I do hope he would give you the chance but will you be ready to take it, if you do not feel the love, if you don't feel the attraction anymore, sometimes its worth to move on, don't fight for the past , just open yourself for the future... clean love with pashion... as it was before :) ... welcome to the Cafe romantic soul Yos

[Michael Kerr]

i took that chance once and i fell in love. i promised to trust her. she said
she loved me, but now will not talk at all. your poem was well written and i understood
it, i wish she would still tell me im the only one. im sorry to bring up how this makes
me feel. i though it was great. good job.

keep writing
-mike-