Hello Stranger

Hello stranger,
Mother told me not to talk to you,
but sometimes I feel like it’s the right
thing to do.
Talk to a stranger, who has never
heard you wine
just sit back and listen
and loosen up their mind.
Hello stranger,
You are not to blame
for you won’t be a stranger long
soon you will have a name.
Hello Stranger,
the day is going bye
and i’m afraid I have to leave,
I have to say good-bye.
But even though I did, what mother said not.
I feel down in my heart that,
I have learned a lot.
When this day started, you were
just a face in a crowd with no end
but in the end
you have a name and I have
a new friend
Hello stranger.
 

Reviews

[WriterMe]

A few errors but nothing a quick proof read couldn't fix =]
Funny, i was just thinking the other day how easy it is to tell a complete stranger you problems because they have nothing to judge you on when they give their small bits of advice.
You voiced out my thoughts exactly.
Good job =]

[SilentDreamer]

I like this. :) Very nice, unique idea, although it does have some grammar errors. However I did like it and think you did a good job.