A poem for Kimberly in Iraq

Stars at night like flames of light.
Help me find me way.
Paths at home like winding roads.
Tell me it’s ok.
People say that there's no way.
Tell me to give up.
But I put them down.
Ignore their words.
And just keep in looking up.
Nothings harder then it seams.
When you try.
To live your dreams.
Hold on long and hold on tight.
To what you feel is always right.
Nothing harder then it seams.
When your try to live your dreams.

Author's Note

Please only leave me a review if you have a lot to say. I don�t care the little reviews that say you like it. I want deep, interesting reviews that make me feel like I should keep writing. But if all your going to say is "I liked it" please...don�t bother....thank you.

Reviews

[Jae]

Wow this was so amazing.
My boyfriends brother just got back from Iraq and Im so happy about it.
I love the lines
"Stars at night like flames of light.
Help me find me way.
Paths at home like winding roads.
Tell me it's ok. "

This poem was beautifully written and absolutely lovely.

~Rem