a million children..

a million children..

struggling to breathe

while here i am

crying, over what i think i need

 

her screams!

his eyes..

drilling my heart as if a dream..

a million children

with the world to blame..

 

violence

spreading like it does

whos to stop it?

why not us?

why not us....

 

 

 

Author's Note

please tell me what you think.. this piece means alot to me.

Reviews

[Voice]

Very powerful thank you for entering this into the Write to Fight contest and keep fighting with your words...

Voice

[The Spaniard]

The world is in a sad state right now. If only enough people could realize it a difference could be made. Very well written. It struck deep.

[run vs remember]

FLIP bro that's amazing!

wow, I really don't even know what to say, that's just really great. Awesome.

[Cคɾเ&#..]

I can see why you care for it so much. I love it, i think it shows what the world certainly is like today. People thinking of themselves when others across the world are dying of something that can be prevented. It has other meanings as well, I can see that. But overall Great job! Im adding it right now to my favorites in my library. Keep it up. Oh, nice guitar. i have an acoustic too :)