Inspired from some of the road trips we've done in the US and Europe. Inspired from the hundreds of travel fiction consumed over the past years.
Black top race closely behindWhite lines ahead chewed;Spit out milesOld thoughts hide under bold new skyRenew faded colors in reverberant light Signboards overheadGently transform breath, expand heart sublimeStrange places swallowed and left behindJaded mind like byroads breaks freeFrom yesterday's promises, tomorrow's mysteryTo find a new selfElsewhere go ITo rekindle an old lost love inside Tremble and quiver in the wake of air displacedSolemn milestones gathermoss counting miles tracedGiant windmills tower, arms embraceStillness of land, tremulous heart with grace Turn upon turn, mile into mileThis is who I amThis is where I want to beBorrowing new life,Endeavoring to seekWanderlust never rest inside of me
Anu, I repeat myself every time I visit here and it's only because you leave me with so little new to say. Your work is magnificent and I would like to peek into your soul to see who's living there. Thank you so much for this work!
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What a lovely thing to say DrD! Peek into my soul and see who is living there....thank you for visit.. read moreWhat a lovely thing to say DrD! Peek into my soul and see who is living there....thank you for visiting my work again. You truly inspire me. I can almost feel a new poem trying to break free.
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Ah Anu, many a wondrous poem is seeking a soul like yours to happen in.
masterfully penned and strangely comforting to absorb, your word choice and use is creative and exciting. a great write!
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What can I say. This forum is so amazing...all the work I read and absorb...it's a different world o.. read moreWhat can I say. This forum is so amazing...all the work I read and absorb...it's a different world out here. Sharing with family and friends is nice, but being in a place where poets live is truly inspirational.
Well penned.
I can hear the spirit of Ulysses of Alfred Lord Tennyson in your piece.
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oh wow! You are too kind and I am embarrassed and inspired at the same time.
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Thank you Anu for the reaction and feedback.
I am very pleased that you are inspired.
K.. read moreThank you Anu for the reaction and feedback.
I am very pleased that you are inspired.
Keep the zeal all along.
Never rest from the lovely endeavor.
very well written. I can relate. I used to ride my motorcycle everywhere and the freeing feeling and thoughts that flooded my soul could have been these words here ... only you've written them as I could not.
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Thanks Ed for your super kind comment. This was a toughie coz I wanted to capture how i change as a .. read moreThanks Ed for your super kind comment. This was a toughie coz I wanted to capture how i change as a person when I travel and the tiny nuances.
What got my attention was the title part of my life I’ve wondering up and down and all around the country I had a friend say once that what I did was called wanderlust, so I can relate to this piece with some understanding, love how it comes together, especially the ending.
Excellent write.