Enjoy the beach

Enjoy the beach

A Poem by Trong Van
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Just another beautiful day on the beach

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Strolling down North Bondi beach

Let bare skin soaks up more sun rays

Our weather is perfect today

After week raining cats and dogs

 

Check messages and clearing the log,

Call history... should NOT stay behind

Anything that my wife may find

Suspicious... All gone and that's it!

 

Lets hang out, relaxing a bit

Maximise the use of spare time

Indulgence is not a crime

Enjoy it while on the loose...


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© 2015 Trong Van


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Hi Trong, I enjoyed read it. The thought that came to me was that It reminds of haiku, the same structure, but longer...................very good. I love the beach and hanging out; it gave me a great feeling.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Trong Van

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for dropping by and giving your review Robert. Cheers :)

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Trong Van
Trong Van

Sydney, Australia



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