A beautiful day

A beautiful day

A Poem by Trivén

A beautiful day
A beautiful scene
A beautiful place in space and time to be in

Golden light, twinkling in the lake
Golden light, scattering amongst the trees
A golden light, gently warming your face
And a golden smile from it emanate

A memory of bliss and wonder
Reminiscing, I wish it longer
A moment only deep friendship could share
Dreaming I again were there 

A beautiful day
A beautiful scene
From that place in space and time
A kernel of something new within

© 2025 Trivén


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Awwwwwwwwww!!! Triven this poem is so sweet!!! The way that you use as few words to not only paint a picture but also share a story is a real talent!! I love how innocent it feels when you read it very sweet. I

t truly is a wonderful thing to be able to capture those moments into writing and share it with others. I really appreciate you sharing your poem!!:)

Posted 1 Day Ago


Trivén

1 Day Ago

Thanks Kady. It's a special moment indeed that I'm happy I've managed to capture. I'm happy it trans.. read more
Kady R.

1 Day Ago

Yes you did!! I'm very happy to have read it!!

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Added on April 3, 2025
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Trivén
Trivén

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