The bay of none

Read and wonder

Be that as it may

Where am I?

Living in a dream

Where did you go?

That was that

now where to?

The title of blackness darkness

Question is where from?

Visions of fractions separated apart

Why is it waiting?

Fluid motion

towards nothing.

Vastness alike

Here is home

Space dripping from below

How come?

Now it's your turn to stay

Waiting time is over

Below freezing nothing's solid

only questions that float arise.

Final touch is like a feather

Final kiss is like a stone

Final sight is the end of the end

While the final thought is never to begin.

Author's Note

Please do comment. Any thoughts or feelings please do express. Barely know myself what to make of it...

Reviews

[Jesse Domingos]

Its great description. The poem it self flowed great. You get a sense of not having ground under your feet, being lost in space. Saying goodbye also, the ending really hits me with that. A hard goodbye, that doesn't go well or was the final one. Like you lost someone. I great poem had me reading without pause and I was lost with your words. A very well done poem I had to read it twice. Great job keep writing!

[Neville]

I kinda like this & think it has some considerable potential. N