china town.

cheeng cheeng chong

ive waited so long

to eat at this place

and share with this race

their noodles so long

and nothing cooked wrong

if cooked at all

its sweet to my jaw

oh how the chinese

seem to please my needs.

oh my dear siddartha guatama

i dont want to have to deal with the drama

of fighting over this delicious food

just push it over here cause im in the mood.

 

 

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

clever and a fun read!!~ =)~

[zombiikillah666]

I have found jesus through this
excellent poem....
now ill go to heaven.........unless
it got blowededddd up first. xD
ahhhhhh.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it gangster. (:

[heard of meese]

o geez, she did steal your lines..!!
haha.

[Devons]

To: A Forgotten Soul,

Hey! Stop stealin' my lines, lady!!!!

[Jessica]

Pointless and trivial but very funny and real. Well done.

[Bunny Thumper]

Yummmm (:
I lovvee chinese food..(:
I saw you at the chinese place a week or two ago ..
Unless you have a twin ??
Anyway.. poooottt...
Its the chickennn..(:

[Devons]

Very cool and very funny.
Pointless and trivial.
But real.
And real funny.