you and me

about a girl who falls in love

When I met you

You seemed sweet

as sweet as a hand full of candy

 

You won my heart

And i became your Juliet

As the days when by

My love grew for you like a tree

 

We laughed so much like we were in our own world

We were both there for eachother

Our love was growing stronger

By the hour

 

Everything was going

Well great!

Untill you met that girl

She was as pretty as a flower

 

And you started to love her

And unlove me

Now my heart is broken in 3

Author's Note

plz review i wanna know what i can do to make my writing stronger

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

you write from your heart , thats what important :)