Could you be the one?

Could you be the one?

A Poem by trisha roy
"

talks about how a gril is trying to figure out if the guy she loves is the one

"

Could you be?

Be the one

That i've been waiting for

My whole life

 

When I kiss you

I hear a church bell ring

When I kiss you

I see the most beautiful

fireworks

 

When I hug you

I feel wram

When I hug you

I think ''how could I be so lucky

To have you in my life''

 

Now I know that

Your the one

The one i've been waiting

For my whole life

 

Cuz you went down

On one knee and

Asked me ''will you marry me?''

 

© 2011 trisha roy


Author's Note

trisha roy
plz review :) it toke alot of hurt to write this one

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ATG
A very interesting and romantic poem. It was very well written and there wasn't any noticeable flaws. My only complaint is that size of the font. It seems a bit excessive. Other than that, the poem was great.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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trisha roy
trisha roy

thurso, quebec, Canada



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ive always loved to write. i am a french high school studen.i love meeting new people from across the world.my favortie thing to write are poems and songs. more..

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