The way you

The way you

A Poem by trisha roy
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it tells you about what a guy did to his girlfriend and how she felt about it

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The way you lagphed

Made me smile

The way you held me

kepted me safe

 

The way you kissed

Made me think

That you really loved me

 

The way you cared

Made me feel loved

The way you looked

At me was like

You were in a dream

 

The way you ran

off with that girl

really hurt me...

© 2011 trisha roy


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trisha roy
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sad but good writing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"The way you"..title is just awesome:)
try to write long and explain more..
that will make you strong in writing and all:)
initially the girl feel awesome..later when her boyfriend
ran far away.. it hurts her so much:(

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 20, 2011
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trisha roy
trisha roy

thurso, quebec, Canada



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ive always loved to write. i am a french high school studen.i love meeting new people from across the world.my favortie thing to write are poems and songs. more..

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