Love Notes

Love...

 

This intrument in my chest beats for you

It pumps rhythmic, coppery, sweet for you

The forceful drums and sensual strums

Strike heated chords, soul-deep for you

Reviews

[Priya]

Ah, this is exquisite! Why on earth has this not received any reviews till now? Such a travesty of justice.
I love how you've described the heart, and its forceful feelings. I've said elsewhere how much I love short, good poems. This is a new favourite :)

[Mortricia]

Thanks guys, I appreciate it! :)

[AK]

More than a year and just one review? That's a record. Brilliant poem, and great personification! I loved it!