Blind Guardian

Blind Guardian

A Poem by Mortricia
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The title covers it well enough.

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My thoughts are too quick

and my midsection's sick

I can't stand straight

but, it's like-

my feet won't wait

they just kick along

and my head comes late

Spinning off my axis

I'm quickly losing traction

and I know that none of this

is to your satisfaction

but I can't slow down

my steps tread light

above the ground

and out of sight.

© 2014 Mortricia


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Interesting! I like the quick, dizzying tone it carries.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 5, 2010
Last Updated on December 3, 2014
Tags: blind, guardian, running, weird, confused, traction, feet, escape

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Mortricia
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Get cozy to take a journey through a rhythmic, twisting prison, I'm a metaphoricalien and writing is my mission. "Didja hear about the guy who lost his left side? He's all right now..... more..

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