Eyes Closed

Eyes Closed

A Poem by David Elijah
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marchtwelfth2018. A song.

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God you're trying to show
Me a way out I know
But I keep my eyes closed

I've been doing it
Doing it on purpose
How the hell can I resist


I'm seeking out a waste of time
Im trying to ease my mind
Giving help a blind eye
Til you're convinced I'm blind


This blindfold I tie
Will be the noose that takes my life
Will I refuse to die

Is this called free will
To choose what blood to spill
So why do i choose my own


I'm seeking out a waste of time
Im trying to ease my mind
Giving help a blind eye
Til you're convinced I'm blind

© 2018 David Elijah


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Funny how I find this when I am feeling the same way. This is a very moving write. To me. I appreciate the free style. You have posted a great poem and I appreciate it! Keep Writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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This poem can interpreted in various ways. Another emotional and powerful poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


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David Elijah

6 Years Ago

Thanks dude! I really like how this song sounds on guitar :)

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David Elijah
David Elijah

Tacoma, WA



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I tend to write when I'm sad. I'm basically dumping all my poetry and lyrics here lol. Baptist, 19, Korean-American, meme addict, love listening to and making music, all time favorite record is Spr.. more..

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