Spoiled

Spoiled

A Poem by David Elijah
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aprilthirtieth2018. An analogy.

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He abused his power when he was king of the world.
The peasants overcame his army and his power was hurl'd.
His king friends looked upon his misfortune with pity.
With rage in his heart he began to vandalize the city.
The peasants were terrified for he had nothing to lose.
Trapped him where they could end his life if they so choose.
The city that was once his, full of people of his own.
The peasants pitied too that he was stripped of his thrown.
So they returned to him his crown after his goodness was vowed.
But you can't recover rotten milk that has to be tossed out.
He went about, once again, to have his status pimped.
But this time done in secret with all witnesses lynched.
After some time, he went ham to make up for time missed.
Too many peasants were hung for them to be able to stop this bliss.

© 2018 David Elijah


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Lovely Tale!
Excellent poem.
Thank you.
Congratulations.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow dude I think you are an amazing writer and more people should review you writing, This is so nice, it's pure and true.. I think it's simply amazing great job :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David Elijah

6 Years Ago

Thanks man. It means a ton to me that you think that ㅇㅁㅇ
David Elijah

6 Years Ago

I think it's understandable that not many people review my writing cause I just started putting them.. read more
Sanbino Rodriguez-White

6 Years Ago

Haha, that could be a reason but I do think your writing is great some people don't feel the same so.. read more

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Added on April 30, 2018
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David Elijah
David Elijah

Tacoma, WA



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I tend to write when I'm sad. I'm basically dumping all my poetry and lyrics here lol. Baptist, 19, Korean-American, meme addict, love listening to and making music, all time favorite record is Spr.. more..

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