I Am Weak

I Am Weak

A Poem by David Elijah
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apriltwentyfifthtwentyeighteen. A song. (we have a gazebo on our back deck.)

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Oh you've hurt me
Through all means of injury
You've broken my heart, my mind, my knees
From kneeling i need to beg you please

Please forgive me i am weak

First and foremost I know I haven't been the best son
I know that I'm suppose to have a more mature reaction
But there comes a point where the yelling becomes
Too much for my ears to bear I wanted to be numb'd
I wanted nothing more than to never feel at all
But the gazebo isn't tall
Enough for me to hang from.

[key of G#: 1&1sus, 6sus&6, 3, 4{m}sus2add6]

© 2018 David Elijah


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At times we try hard not to disappoint and it goes left. Good read

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is deep and relatelable, we often feel weak and insignificant, especially in the eyes of our parents Great poem...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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David Elijah
David Elijah

Tacoma, WA



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I tend to write when I'm sad. I'm basically dumping all my poetry and lyrics here lol. Baptist, 19, Korean-American, meme addict, love listening to and making music, all time favorite record is Spr.. more..

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