In Hot Water

februaryninthtwentyeighteen. shower thoughts.

A culture full of plastic

Not where I want to live

I'll let this water burn me

Now I don't want to leave

Leave everything behind

Three walls of solid white

I'll let this water burn me

Now I don't want to leave

There's no more soap to wash away

disgrace as black as coal

But heat upon my back keeps me

warm in a world of cold.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sanbino Rodriguez-White]

Wow that last line is pure brilliance and the poem is amazing and relatelable

[David Elijah]

thanks dude! leaving the shower is always so tough lol

[Sanbino Rodriguez-White]

I think getting out the shower is the hardest thing I've done my whole life no BS