Our Picture

The rain is pouring down inside my clouded mind

My hurt, your hurt transforming into a blur

We are gadged by our past conditioning

How we were taught to love clashing within

Our true feelings want to explode

Repitition of old habits reap our realities haven

Doubt and guilt masquerade within our defining thoughts

Sabotage is our only defence to protect fragility and grief

Softness and sweetness creep in and take on a new aroma

Covering our beautiful moments with tranquility and enchantment

Hovering above the universe, we both gaze at our picture

You and i kissing in a loving embrace

For in that fragment of time our souls really feel the emotion

Like the enigmatic motion of a pure and mystical energy

Revealing the cloak of fear and sadness and wishing it away

Happiness is its replacement circling all around in spheres of joy

Hope, optimism and laughter gather around and fill our memories

As our past is forgotten and locked away

The future portrays itself within the golden rays of sunshine

Shinning within the windows of angelic eyes

Destiny is challenged and lives to create another path

Which we both dance on with freedom and carefree ambivalence

Claiming our love and nuturing its strength and abundent power till the very end

Author's Note

ignore grammer problems

Reviews

[ALifeAquatic]

Honestly I was lost in how beautiful the imagery was, so much so I've had to read it a few times.

"Softness and sweetness creep in and take on a new aroma
Covering our beautiful moments with tranquility and enchantment,"

I adore this bit, such clever, enchanting imagery. I'm not one normally for love poems or poems about relationships, but I really did enjoy reading this one! Great!

AHouseOfChambers

[Heavyhearted]

strong words and vivid imagery.. i like how it portrays melancholy and nostalgia with a tinge of hope.
this is the best of what i've seen of your work. great job.

[Antonio Valentino]

This is wonderful writing Trinity, I'm glad I got to read it tonight.

Fantastic!
Antonio

[Jane Doe Smith Rogers]

It speaks to me of crossing the line into forbidden love, reticent because of guilt fraught by fears. But love is victorious and the fears pass. The path has been chosen, the decision made was the right one because, in the end, there is joy.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow! This has everything in it...some of the hard times, the good, the bad, and the great moments ya both had in time, and hopefully a good future is to come if things are good. I liked that u used the picture, too. It does hold so many memories in that alone. Once again, ya did a wonderful job!! :)

B.A.