You Laugh at Your Farts

Your farts seem to amuse you
But all they stink of is rotten pooh
I lie awake and contemplate plugging your arse
So you will not part with the festering smell
that gives me hell
Laughing away you seem happily gay
At the putride play that comes from a hole
That petrifies my deflated soul

 

Reviews

[Jane Doe Smith Rogers]

This actually could be a fun topic, but it seems to be treated with an attempt at black humor here. I would treat it with levity instead.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Okay to write about a fart must be impactful in your life. Give him so colon cleanser and sit him outside for a few days. Very impactful poem. I enjoyed.

[Legion]

Poor girl. Plug him up. Never got into that sort of thing. But then I've been told I'm not the typical guy. Good write.

[Orlando Murcia]

That was cool, I loved the illustration, Man those must of been some stinky farts, great job! I loved it