No eyes

A small haiku I just thought of.

A man with no eyes

seeing the world much brighter

than people with sight

Reviews

[Legacy]

Trinity,

The depth inside these limited words is powerful and striking.

I admire writes that can make this much of a punch in so much of a minimal amount of words.

These words written bring foresight to all... and hindsight to many. Somewhat of a proverb in content, this would make an excellent work for one of the many contests for Poetic infusion Society. We soon will have a proverb contest; however, for the time being, it looks as if Enlightenment may be fitting.

I enjoyed the words and I appreciate your sharing.

Legacy

[Legacy]

Trinity,

The depth inside these limited words is powerful and striking.

I admire writes that can make this much of a punch in so much of a minimal amount of words.

These words written bring foresight to all... and hindsight to many. Somewhat of a proverb in content, this would make an excellent work for one of the many contests for Poetic infusion Society. We soon will have a proverb contest; however, for the time being, it looks as if Enlightenment may be fitting.

I enjoyed the words and I appreciate your sharing.

Legacy

[ambur]

Very simple, but it has a wonderful message. Haiku, yes? I love it.

[dangerbooze]

For something you just thought of, it's very good. Simple, yet powerful in its meaning.