Breath me in

Breath me in,
feel me before you see me
feel my soul between your fingers
as you relax & fall asleep
dream me in your heart
as you fill your thrust
drink me in & know my ups and downs
when you hold me take in my smell
take away a piece of me
look into my eyes as you lay beside me
walk by my side not ahead
learn me
love me
breath me in 

Reviews

[Stephen]

I really loved this. Great Work! When I want to get to know another woman that I am interested in, I really want to get to know the heart of that person and learn everything about that person. So much so, that I know them so well, that I know them better then they know themselves. It was good reading

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank you ♡

[Stephen]

no problem

[B-poet]

Very indepth and sensual. Nice work. :)

[.]

This is a beautiful love poem ,Sarah. It is very well written, and I love the way you displayed your emotions. I love the last three lines "Breathe Me In" a lot. Thank you for exposing me to this. - Cord

[Eagle Cruagh]

No one can put their innermost feelings
in to the written word. I know , after a
lot of trying. You have done exactly that,
you have expressed exactly what it is like
to be in love, or what you want from love.
Thank you,
----- John

[Kenneth Compton]

This serves to remind me that love can be seen as an act of emotional self mutilation, cutting pieces of yourself away for others to graft to them, in the hopes they do the same. It is a great burden of trust we ask of those who would love us, and it's a great burden of faith we thrust upon ourselves in reciprocation. Very well written, good job nailing down the ephemeral nature of one of the many facets of love with words. You truly do have a poet's heart!

[Tate Morgan]

love as it is meant to be but rarely is.But if it were easy everyone would be in love it because it is rare that it is special

[Breann S.]

For anyone who has been in love, they know the feeling, but have probably never put it into words. You somehow have managed to put a one-of-a-kind feeling into your own words, and you've done it beautifully!

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, emphatically strong and to the point, yet there's this sensual feel, as your poem flows, to simply know your soul, to delve into it...I felt it. Lovely poem, Sarah. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

"learn me
love me
breath me in "
A beautiful poem of love. The giving and receiving of love was described with skill. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote