Breath me in, feel me before you see me feel my soul between your fingers as you relax & fall asleep dream me in your heart as you fill your thrust drink me in & know my ups and downs when you hold me take in my smell take away a piece of me look into my eyes as you lay beside me walk by my side not ahead learn me love me breath me in
I really loved this. Great Work! When I want to get to know another woman that I am interested in, I really want to get to know the heart of that person and learn everything about that person. So much so, that I know them so well, that I know them better then they know themselves. It was good reading
This is a beautiful love poem ,Sarah. It is very well written, and I love the way you displayed your emotions. I love the last three lines "Breathe Me In" a lot. Thank you for exposing me to this. - Cord
No one can put their innermost feelings
in to the written word. I know , after a
lot of trying. You have done exactly that,
you have expressed exactly what it is like
to be in love, or what you want from love.
Thank you,
----- John
This serves to remind me that love can be seen as an act of emotional self mutilation, cutting pieces of yourself away for others to graft to them, in the hopes they do the same. It is a great burden of trust we ask of those who would love us, and it's a great burden of faith we thrust upon ourselves in reciprocation. Very well written, good job nailing down the ephemeral nature of one of the many facets of love with words. You truly do have a poet's heart!
For anyone who has been in love, they know the feeling, but have probably never put it into words. You somehow have managed to put a one-of-a-kind feeling into your own words, and you've done it beautifully!
Wow, emphatically strong and to the point, yet there's this sensual feel, as your poem flows, to simply know your soul, to delve into it...I felt it. Lovely poem, Sarah. Thank you for sharing.
"learn me
love me
breath me in "
A beautiful poem of love. The giving and receiving of love was described with skill. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
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