what would you do

how do you know this world is real
have you traveled out side your comfort zone
what if this place we live is like a movie on TV
we're all the characters and someone dies in the next scene

is it you or me?

what if rain drops are really tears from angles as they watch us and grow sick
do you think that it was planed ?
was it all written in a script ?
our first kiss was that really supposed to be our good bye
did they have to change the words  to make it not make sense so we don't catch on
that maybe free will was just something that was made up to make us feel safe ..
if every move you've made has been planed ..
if you could find your script would you rewrite it ?
 prove you have control and your
different

Reviews

[Jerome]

I like this. "Is it your or me?"

This is a good piece, needs some polish and it would really shine. I think the only thing more terrifying that finding the script of your life, is discovering you have the ability to change it. Got me thinking, and got me writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good questions raised by the questions and statements in this poem. Hard for many to escape their comfort zone. Easy to be blind to the problems of this world. Hard to control your world. But if we are lucky. Maybe we can assist someone on our journey. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote