stupid Line

Stupid line
salty water falls you always dissapoint
Hopes crashing down like lightning penatrating sand never creating crystals in this sand
Your excitement makes everything hurt your happiness making walls crumble
Seeing your smile fills souls with large amounts of anger
You words filled with awe and love turns the strongest parts of life into mush
Yet you take magic for granted most would kill for the love of a heart beat you so selfishly runaway from
Sleep to chase a dream that will never come a dream that slowly fades into the grayscale of a nightmare
Reaching for those hands yet always just out of reach
Souls sing a song that will never be heard.
Life is taken away
All hope dies with a stupid line.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest lines and statements led to direct ending.
"All hope dies with a stupid line."
The poem left me with the knowledge to know more. Thank you Sarah for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Alucard6336]

The way I feel life is a line, from one day to the next. From birth to death and what may lay beyond we are merely waiting in line, destined to live out our fates as time constantly marches on.

I like this. I can't believe no one has reviewed it yet. You have a real talent, never stop writing and never give up.

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank you very much