It's a lonely world

Its a lonely world ma'am / daddy
Its a lonely world brother/sister
Its a lonely world grandma/grandpa

Its a lonely world we're living in

People starving/struggling and making it
you cant brake us down
you can tare us apart

Its a lonely world

But we're fighting it
What you throw at us we're never gonna give it up
or surrender it 

Braking our backs just to survive
only to bring home nickles and dimes

Its a lonely world

Saying i do to give each other their lives
only to be stabbed in the back with a knife

Its a lonely world

Babies being born into heartache and strife

Its a lonely world

Soldiers being pulled away from their
Kids and their Wives

Its a lonely world

The little man works his whole life for peace
Then he dies

Its a lonely world

BRAKE FREE from these chains
BRAKE FREE from this life
We're LIVING IN
        LOVING IN
STRUGGLING IN

BRAKE free

BRAKE free

BRAKE fREE

FROM THESE CHAINS

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I wish this generation had the energy of the sixties kids. They fought for peace. Waiting list to go to war today.. No job and war is better. That is very scary. Kids should be having fun. Not killing or dying. A very good poem. Made me think this late evening. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful message of breaking the chains and a call for freedom within and without...
A well written poem.

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank u very much this one is one of my favorites

[Somebrownnerd]

Very interesting take on the world, it certainly can be lonely and cold. I really enjoyed the structure. Nice write.

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank you I really enjoyed writing this one .. it is a song I sing in my band so it gives me double excitement

[Levi Levin]

This is a nice write, and life is truly a struggle sometimes.

[KeeD]

Break Free we all must, i love your presentation for this poem and it's context.. excellent write Sarah xoxo.

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank u very much and as always thank u for your review

[KeeD]

also I think you meant to type break free instead of brake < 3

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So...beautifully described...the package is damn nice...i liked it..i liked your cuts......i didn't ever seen before...i've made a song from your poem....i'm singing still...nice ....very nice.....amie......i'm impressed...i think i should read your more writing's...

nice day...!!

[Sarah Redigan]

Thanks it really is a song I sing with my guitarest

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wow....if you further loook at my writing's then you'll find tht me too sing a song's......

[Devanshu Rajput]

'soldiers being pulled
away from their
Kids and their Wives' would be fav line of mine...captured great thoughts behind simple words...you said truth...excellent work...really appreciable...the poem left me speechless! And makes me say great!lovely piece of writing...wonderful read!keep writing...

[Sarah Redigan]

thank you very much i am very flattered and love hearing when people enjoy my writing ..

[Devanshu Rajput]

your welcome

[Sarah Redigan]

i really didn't know how people we're going to take this one ... but i love it so i said what the heck and posted .. i have been holding this one for a while .. glad to see i was worried for no reason