living on our love song

Touch my heart with youre song
Feel my soul with your lips
Say im yours forever with a lyric

Cuz were living on our love song

I love you from the moon to the stars
Our love has no time always meant to swore
And when your old and gray ill meet you on the porch
One day

Cuz we're living on our love song 

Still seeing that wild boy i still adore
From all those years before
And on that porch well stare into the past
Remembering those scared kids that held on so tight
And stuck together during all the troubles of life

Cuz Were living on our love song

Reviews

[Gee]

Really sweet.Together into old age

[s y e]

Sarah, this is so romantic and sweet. Could be the sweetest song ever....

[Sarah Redigan]

Awe thanks so much noodle

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow this is so romantic and sweet .Really enjoyed true :)

[ganga ramesh]

Cuz were living on our love song- it should be "cuz WE ARE"

I love you from the moon to the stars
Our love has no time always meant to swore
And when your old and gray ill meet you on the porch
...these are my favs...great go!!

[Sarah Redigan]

i wrote were on purpose ... thank you again for the awesome review

[ganga ramesh]

oh then sorry for not understanding...welcome:)

[Sami Khalil]

Touch my heart with youre song
Feel my soul with your lips
Say im yours forever with a lyric
My faves. Passionate...

[Sarah Redigan]

thank your

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful song and flow of words. Love need to be our only goal. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank you gor reviewing

[Tate Morgan]

Almost a lyrical song actually. Very nice

[KeeD]

This reminds me of the song Ocean Avenue by Yellowcard :) it's beautiful, it reminisces on young love and had a very honest approach to it. Great write

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank u .. yeah I noticed that edit was typing this on my phone and it auto put it in there. ♡♥

[KeeD]

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[Everett DeValle]

Lovely sentiments, Sarah...a love song from the heart.

[Sarah Redigan]

thank you

[Everett DeValle]

You are welcome, Sarah.