Dancer in the sun

Pulsing, pushing , destroying beauty,

Demolishing , praying , when word doesn’t come

Giving in , taking over in the darkness  it spreads

Running , tripping , falling right past it

When dreams become nightmares in your perfect havens 

No inner peace to return to when your meadows burn

Inside a place with no escape

How alone are you?

Have you no light  in a soul ?

That your heaven is no longer home?

Inner depths so black and hollow

What happens to the light after all hope is gone

Dear dancer in the sun where has all peace gone?

Reviews

[ganga ramesh]

the package as a whole is wonderful and mind boggling!!! :)

[Sarah Redigan]

awe thank u very much

[ganga ramesh]

always welcome:)

[The Nude Writer]

I love this and such a beautiful image you paint :)

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank u

[Sheila Kline]

Your questions are well versed, and gives one many reasons to think of what is the accepted normal......peace is not easily found when life is as this!

[junaid altaf]

the concept is quite impressive!!!!!!

[Sarah Redigan]

Well thank you

[Sarah Redigan]

Youre very sweet

[junaid altaf]

m not sugar!!!!!!! hahah

[Sarah Redigan]

Well I hope not sugar doesnt have arms .... u wouldn't be able to write

[junaid altaf]

actually i dont have arms............ i have a soul fitted with this heart and he is responsible for this!!!!!!!!

[Sarah Redigan]

Okay then ....

[junaid altaf]

we are something invisibly deep inside..........

[Sarah Redigan]

Explain?

[junaid altaf]

we are not the physical body with a name and occupation...........simple...........we are smthn really divine!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sarah Redigan]

Oh

[junaid altaf]

what.........

[Sarah Redigan]

Nothing

[junaid altaf]

nthng doesn't exist

[Chris]

comes a time when you realize - there's just no goin' home from where you're at ...no matter how much you want to, need to, even HAVE to... you just can't

[Anna]

This could be interpreted in many different ways, making this very easy to relate to. Darkness could be anything but that feeling of trying to gain back peace that you've once had is a very strong feeling.
"When dreams become nightmares in your perfect heavens No inner peace to return to when your meadows burn." Great imagery, really connects to the senses.
Great piece.

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank u

[KeeD]

Omg that picture is haunting beautiful. A very intense piece, felt like It was speaking about my life .. i was living this nightmare or dream.. It allows for reflection, a very well written poem. Favorited.

[Sarah Redigan]

Thank u

[Sam Gregory]

This is quite thought provoking, could be a few meanings to this tbh. Good work :)