Soul dance

In these moments you wrapped around me i can feel my soul dance
i drift along the river water glistening over my palms
sweet hums of nature singing wildly around
moving my hand to my heart i can feel it pounding deep inside my chest longing
silly little cloud in the sky why must you cry upon me
feeling your tears sends shivers through my concrete exterior straight to my insides
the sky is open and painted with color  this excites me
following the color in the sky brings sweet songs of victory to mind
pitter pandering wings of butterflies much like the ones in  my tummy when you come to close
as i reach the ends of the color i find heaven with you at the end of this rainbow

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful, Sarah...lovely sentiments expressed. :)

[Tate Morgan]

I really loved this flowed effortlessly from the heart

[Sarah Redigan]

thanks tate it really did just flow out of me

[Tate Morgan]

I can tell it did I have only one free flowing poem here and I can say it is the only one I ever did

[Sarah Redigan]

well i guess its a good thing you work is always amazing

[Sheila Kline]

To dance with the soul of another is sweet musings for the spirit!!
Lovely!

[Chris]

A very "felt" description of the intensity of love.

[Forest Green]

sweetly sensual...nice writing...

[Sarah Redigan]

thank you

[Forest Green]

welcome...

[Sarah Redigan]

:)

[Antonio Valentino]

whether its infatuation or her big sister, love, you've described it fully and wholeheartedly in only the way youth and innocence truly can..

a lovely piece and a nice picture too.. i hope you caught some fish!

:)