Our Forever

There are some people I love earnestly. However, how long can we be together, forever? People die at different times; we have different forevers. If we count, my love and I will share similar forevers

Lets count the stars, dear.
Why would I ask?
Well it would take forever to
count the stars.
But that's just it...
This way, forever is not ambiguous,
it is our exact gift to each
other.
Let the night sky be dark;
no on will see our passion.
Let us count the stars;
they shall bare witness to our
identical forevers.

Reviews

[Legendary_Princess]

Awwwwww I love this. I can feel the love from the two lovers. Wish love like this happen more in real life. Anyway good job. :D

[Shivam Murari]

Two true lovers always share similar forever, as you speak. The counting of star, I see the metaphor so nicely put in there! Nice poem. Welcome to Writerscafe!

Please do read and review my poems too.

Hope to listen more from you :)

[Mizo4]

nice poem, it has an interesting mood to it and this is a good tool when writing. Muy bien.

[Tobias Ruperto]

Thank you for taking the time to read it, that mean so much. I also send my thanks since this is my first poem on here!