The End

The Sun

It let the light into this new world

And into the blood into the lake

Into the battlefield of the dead

 

Everything was over

War, peace, love, hate over

All that was left was radiation

 

Where was he

Paradise

Looking down unto the Earth

At the dirt

At the grass

 

There was no grass

He just realized that

There was no tree

No houses

No people

Not even birds

 

He thought he was in a dreamscape

He was not

 

There were others near him in paradise

With one tree

No shade

On an island

 

No water just clouds and the Earth

Nothing else seemed to exist

 Not even himself

Reviews

[Trevor Schack]

Thanks guys I will try to write at least one more before the week is out

[Crifa]

I like this because it shows how easy it is to mistake happiness. One second everything is "paradise" the next you are lonesome and depressed. Good work

[eglantine]

interesting... makes one think 'he' is God or some higher power, but it could also be a metaphor for looking down upon one's own life and the regrets/mistakes.

A very well written write, enjoyed

[Destinyxi]

Nicely written, you did a good job. Keep it up :)

[K-mo]

this is good, got a lot of description and it is well written