move on

It isn't for you and it isn't for me

and it just as well isn't for the publicity.

It was something nice, something sincere

but you think it's for something else I fear.

It came from my heart and it blew your mind

you just can't comprehend me being so kind.

So get over yourself and stop spreading lies

so we can both move on with our lives.

Reviews

[rnuff]

wow deep and emotional.

[Who Cares]

You just made my day, I can relate to this so much right now. When rumors start they are like a wildfire, but when things are get cleared up life still feels different. I think it is just amazing how you can be so nice to people and they stab you in the back, it sucks. You captured emotion in this piece and it was descibed well. I like how you enlarged key words in the sentence, it was creative thought. Nice rhyme scheme and impressive flow. I like it alot, nice work.