Love?

Is it love or is it lust?

            Is it lust?

                        Is it lust?

When I’m alone i feel like i must

            Like i must

                        Like i must

Find you and spend time together

            Time together

                        Time together

Because time apart takes forever

            Takes forever

                        Takes forever

And then we kiss

            Kiss

                        Kiss

And i feel the desire in your lips

            Your lips

                        Your lips

And i feel the wet between your hips

            Your hips

                        Your hips

I make it more with a finger

            With a finger

                        With a finger

That’s when you start to rub my member

            Rub my member

                        Rub my member

I think this is it

            Think this is it

                        Think this is it

But you say those words

            You say those words

                        You say those words

I Don't Want To Go All The Way

            All the Way

                        All The Way

And so we stop

            So we stop

                        So we stop

Even though we almost reached the top

            The top

                        The top

We kiss more before i leave

            I leave

                        I leave

And then you ask Can I See You Again Please?

            Please

                        Please

Reviews

[Jeffrey]

Very well done! I love how you captured the heat of the moment and the reluctance of the loss of innocence. My favorite of yours by far!

[Who Cares]

I like your stucture as well as the repetition. This gives emphisis to each line stanza. This is a very sensual poem and i was hooked from beginning to end. Nice write.