Perfect World

Perfect World

A Poem by La Princesa

In a perfect world,

There are no mistakes

In a perfect world

There are no heartbreaks

In a perfect world

There’s kindness and joy

In a perfect world

There’s peace to enjoy

In a perfect world

People live on forever

In a perfect world

People never say never

In a perfect world

There’s no discrimination or hate

In a perfect world

There’s nobody irate

In a perfect world

There’s no sickness or cancer

In a perfect world

There’s always an answer

In a perfect world

You can fix your wrongdoings

In a perfect world

You can understand your own feelings

In a nonexistent world

There are no wars

In a nonexistent world

Everyone’s voice is heard

In a nonexistent world

Nobody fights with each other

In a nonexistent world

Nobody rejects one another

In a nonexistent world

Everybody is perfect

In a nonexistent world

Everyone is heaven-sent

In a nonexistent world

Everyone can subsist

Well then I guess that that’s why

It doesn’t exist

© 2011 La Princesa


Author's Note

La Princesa
tell me what you think! criticism is greatly appreciated

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When i read this title and the first few lines i thought to myself, okay she's just gonna describe a perfect world, but you brought in a good amout of deepness at the end with the noexistent world. I liked that little twist.:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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La Princesa
La Princesa

Lima, Peru



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