You

A rose so sweet

couldn't make me love.

But your hand in mine

is just enough.

Walking in streets

embroidered with light.

Your eyes mirrored in mine

is as magical as taking flight. 

Reviews

[annalysiar]

Great write.
Sad but true for many.

[Emily]

Love this!!
The first stanza is my favorite!
Keep it up!!

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you Emily! : )

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for love. I agree. Simple things like holding hands and long conversation. The perfect days of a life. Thank you Annie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you coyote for reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Annie.

[Johnny]

Sounds very tender, I like it, great couplet!

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you very much.

[horizon]

This the sweetest poem explaining what it would feel like being in love...it is sooo sweet I just love it...keep sharing poems like this

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Angel of the devil]

this is beautiful. i love it

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you, I am very glad that you enjoyed it.

[Angel of the devil]

your welcome!