Letting go

Letting go

A Poem by Annie Nicole

Something is blocking my thoughts,
weighing me down like an anchor,
while waves crash up against me.
Trying to move against the wind.
This journey is harder than anyone before.
i stop and just close my eyes,
imaging my goal
to not let heavy situations hold me back.
I get a good grip on the chains,
I pull it up and fling it onto my back,
now carrying it with all of my strength.
No longer letting anything weigh me down, 
but still holding onto it until i reach my destination.
Finally i reach the sand and drop the anchor.
Crawling up the shore, i sit, i take a deep breath,
and i feel the relief of letting go of the stress that had controlled me for so long

© 2016 Annie Nicole


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Hard to release stress. But we must.
"Crawling up the shore, i sit, i take a deep breath,
and i feel the relief of letting go of the stress that had controlled me for so long. "
I liked the description of struggle leading to above strong ending. Thank you Annie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Nicole

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome Annie.



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You rocked the first few lines!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Nicole

8 Years Ago

Thank you : )
Hard to release stress. But we must.
"Crawling up the shore, i sit, i take a deep breath,
and i feel the relief of letting go of the stress that had controlled me for so long. "
I liked the description of struggle leading to above strong ending. Thank you Annie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Nicole

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome Annie.

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Annie Nicole
Annie Nicole

Peace , RI



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