Beach

Floating on crystal reflections

that glide through waves of rushing waters.

Sands sparkle with the shine of the sun.

Wind oh so gentle,

breathing in

breathing out.

Warmth of light rays hitting everyone in different ways.

Imprinted feet stray behind as each step is towards home.

Author's Note

Haven't wrote in a while, kind of stiff..

Reviews

[Sasha]

Currently residing by the ocean myself in Cape Cod. And I have to say, it is the only place where I go to get away from every day life and stress. Nothing like an hour or two by the ocean to clear my mind and set my mood high.

Breathing in.
Breathing out.

Great poem. :D

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you! The ocean is a very familiar and close friend of mine : )

[Shabeeh Haider]

Wonderful imagery here. The description of the sea, the sand and the wind are lovely.
The last two lines are magical.

"Warmth of light rays hitting everyone in different ways.
Imprinted feet stray behind as each step is towards home."
.....

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you so much for your comment!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. About my favorite place.
"Floating on crystal reflections
that glide through waves of rushing waters."
Good to find our place where we can gather our thoughts. Thank you Annie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you and yes the beach is a very beautiful place that i could not live without : )

[Coyote Poetry]

I have the lakes in Michigan. Lake and the sea. Good place to know peace and you are welcome.

[Inject Positivity]

I loved the word choices... I think you have created a perfect atmosphere here with natural scene's vivid imagery... The serenity it spreads and the magic it brings is uncomparable... Very well done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you so much!

[Emily]

Loved it!
Very well written!
Well done!!

[Annie Nicole]

thank you so very much Emily!