Storm

A raindrop hits the freckles upon your face.

Holding onto your straw-made hat,

while the winds blows through your curled blue skirt.

Lightning strikes in the distance.

Waves crashing down, 

like a wooden table being smashed on the ground.

Clouds traveling away so fastly,

in large, dark puffy masses. 

You hurry towards safety looking around for any sign of life.

 But all you can see is the darkness over crowding the skies among you.  

When suddenly the loud bangs and crashes begin to stop. 

Almost silent you might think. 

Light breaks through the mists above you, 

the heat from the sun hits your cold, wet skin. 

Your mind begins to slow down and you finally get a chance to breathe, 

a chance for peace and tranquility. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

After the storm. Always a calmness.
"Your mind begins to slow down and you finally get a chance to breathe,
a chance for peace and tranquility. "
The above lines are true. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to good ending. Thank you Annie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Lexi Richard]

Love all the descriptions used and your word choices. It has a great flow and the imagery is wonderful. It's really soothing to read.

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you so much!

[JKRyder]

Again, I love the imagery you portray. You have a knack for it. I love the waves crashing like a wooden table!

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you! : )

[Jake Brunton]

I like this. It really details the feeling of standing out in a dangerous storm, and the relief of sunniness to come afterwords. Nice work!

[Annie Nicole]

Thanks I appreciate it!

[Relic]

Nice poem. The rain i pouring down outside as I read this. I have one of the same name only its shorter.

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you, i just read yours it's quite good!

[Relic]

Thanks, and your welcome.

[Marcus Stockley]

I really liked this :)

It paints a really great picture in my head while I read.

[Annie Nicole]

Thanks man, Glad you like it : )