Dream Cloud

Two roads diverged in my life,
And sorry, I could not travel left,
And have one heart, long I walked.

So I stood awhile,
Pondering the right,
Hoping for some answer.

And I decided,
whilst the path be wretched,
the dream is the cloud so close.

So I walked the right,
Skipping over sticks and stones,
Allowing my heart to beat as one.

And that has made all the difference.

Reviews

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love the allusion to Frost and the dream you have created for us..."skipping over sticks and stones' because they really don't matter in the end... what matters is making your own choices and walking your own paths...

[Treble]

Walking your own paths. I love that! It's so true! Thank you

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you are kindly welcome, Treble :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Something to think about, nicely written :) thanks for sharing :) i'm a rating this 100 points.

[Treble]

Thank you!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)

[Chris]

Good thoughts to pause with...

[Treble]

Thank you :)