Despite the Craters

Despite the Craters

A Poem by Treble

My auburn heart,
layered in sentimentality,
sinks into the valley of the horizon
and harbors every wondrous thought of you.

Your intentions, I find,
Tend to be gold plated,
But I fall for them every time,
Loving every bit of you.

Every memory of you,
Everything I love of you
Changes the beating of my heart.
And I'm blessed to know such a
wondrous and flawed human being.

© 2015 Treble


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craters do not make the moon and are reminders that it isn't perfect...no one is... and to love one's imperfections is to truly love... a creative and well-written piece, Treble

Posted 9 Years Ago


Treble

9 Years Ago

True that. No one is perfect, and that's the most perfect part. :)
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9 Years Ago

Yes, indeed, the perfection in imperfection makes it all perfect :D
Ah, yes, it is a very beautiful poem. About a crush, or a current relationship maybe? Very well done. I am rating this 100 points sharp! Keep writing. Ps: Danny, thanks for the read requests.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Treble

9 Years Ago

Wow, thanks so much, guys!
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Sure thing :)
Creator

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Someone's in looooveeee... Lol. Well, jokes aside, this is awesome. A sweet poem of expressing the love you feel for someone. Very well penned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Oh...you could have fooled me. Lol. Nice poem. :)
Treble

9 Years Ago

Thanks! :) You're the best!
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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